Panda Story

Below is a story one of my students wrote about a panda. He is 8 years old and it is completely unedited. It is also completely AWESOME.

Panda Story
by Ratchapoom Thongsin

Once upon a time has one panda name ko. ko like to play sword, spear knight, fight monster. His dream is he whould like to be hero of the panda village. One day has Panda Pirate his name is Jack Jolo. He came to destroyed the village and kill everyone but has one panda came to fight his name is ko. ko came by his love sword that his father made for him. he kill the pirate and destroy the pirate ship. Since that day he was the hero that can protect our village form other pirate and since that day Jake Jolo not came to this Village forever. THE END.

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